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Resident Evil: Mutation
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Zacky V
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« Thread Started on Feb 25, 2006, 12:20am »

Ok man, I dunno how the Terrorist feels, but I know myself and Behemoth aren't particularly happy with your posts. I'm not seeing much effort, both in length and in the typing itself. Lack of quotations, run on sentences, and posts that consist of two to three lines, are all examples of your posts.
So, instead of the usual flaming you've come to expect from me, I've got some suggestions.

1. Don't rush through your posts.
2. While you may (or may not) be as good a writer as other members, I know you're not incapable, so put effort into your posts.
3. Try making them longer.
4. Include the proper grammar and such.

"oh shit!" Micheal thought remembering his last mission, he hid behind a tube until the others finished the zombies off. "So,"Micheal said,"Anyone know what the fuck is goin on?"

5. Capital letters when needed.
6.If Michael remembered his last mission, he'd have some idea of what was going on, wouldn't he? And if his mission didn't have anything to do with our situation, why include it?
7. As I said earlier, length. That is your entire post, which I'd say is pitiful, but you will get no pity today. My posts aren't as long as say, Behemoth's are, but mine include a lot of detail and action, everything I post is important and interesting.
8. Details,details,details. Make your writing more descriptive. That goes hand in hand with length.

I think if you can handle these suggestions you'll definately be on your way to a better RPer and writer in general, and the roleplay will be better because of it.

« Last Edit: Feb 25, 2006, 12:22am by Zacky V »

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